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Jeliness2
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:22 pm Post subject: Prèlude Pour le Piano
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(I was in the french-speaking mood)
Anyway, I just composed this. lol, the middle is the only good part. The begining is like an etude tableux by Rachmaninoff. Yay.
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2005 9:07 pm Post subject:
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Very flowing, coherent. Still, not particularly melodious, though some of the themes have potential. The harmony seems outright impressionist. Your sense of polyphony isnt too bad; again, it has potential. Remember to build up the intensity as piece progresses. Deserves a B+. Nice effort.
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Philip Daniel
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:45 am Post subject:
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Thank you for those nice words.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:48 am Post subject:
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Thank you for those nice words. |
I wouldn't say all of them are "nice", lol , but I'd hope that they are all constructively critical .
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:53 am Post subject:
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Yeah, well atleast it's constructive unlike some peoples comments off the forum about my piano playing... So, I'm pretty used to bad criticism by now. I just kind of take it in. lol
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