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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 7:58 pm Post subject: A nerdy waltz (now with some sheets)
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Now that the CF composing contest is over I might as well put my piece here. I have no good reason why I chose "nerdywaltz" as filename... Anyway, it was voted 3rd
http://www.chopinforum.com/~nerd/nerdywaltz.mp3
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 1:24 pm Post subject:
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Yar, this weas my favourite in the contest...Too bad it got only 3rd. I'm assuming it's even playable unlie many other amateur compositions I see.
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 1:45 pm Post subject:
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| Scriabinist wrote: |
| Yar, this weas my favourite in the contest... |
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| I'm assuming it's even playable unlie many other amateur compositions I see. |
Yes. It's note even so hard. I'm planning to make the sheets for it in the near future, too (once I learn LilyPond a bit better)
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:34 pm Post subject:
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hahahaha, respec for turnin da gayest possible form into a wikid sausage-fest
dis is actually wikid, i wonda what da FOOK got da 1st place
it bettah be fookin gurd
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 3:35 pm Post subject:
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lso - i detected a finnish influence at da end - when it......finnished
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 3:44 am Post subject:
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I like it a lot! Very nice and pleasant work.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 9:14 pm Post subject:
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Very nice! I like it a lot!
If only I could hear the melody more than the left hand banging loudly, that would be my only complaint.
Also, why is it nerdy?
87 from me, I love it!
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 9:19 pm Post subject:
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roberts op 6 got first...i think it was the right choice for 1st...it is a really good comp
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 9:23 pm Post subject:
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Thanks for liking it
| PianistSk8er wrote: |
If only I could hear the melody more than the left hand banging loudly, that would be my only complaint.
Also, why is it nerdy?
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Maybe when I get the sheets done and you can follow from it you can hear it more clearly. I could of course try to make a better version of it, too.
It's nerdy because a nerd made it I just quicly decided for a filename and happened to call it nerdywaltz.mp3.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 10:08 pm Post subject:
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Quite good. It's really waltzy, but candidly, there is nothing really special about. It's better than my compositions, but there is nothign that jumps out of the listener.
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2004 11:31 pm Post subject:
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Holy crap
95 from me, man.
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 4:22 pm Post subject:
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| PianistSk8er wrote: |
Very nice! If only I could hear the melody more than the left hand banging loudly, that would be my only complaint.
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I agree with PS, the left hand should be a lot softer and less mechanical. You could really make this into a beautiful recording. I really like the composition though.
95 for composition
75 for execution
85 OVERALL
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 6:05 pm Post subject:
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| Amnesia wrote: |
I agree with PS, the left hand should be a lot softer and less mechanical. You could really make this into a beautiful recording. I really like the composition though.
95 for composition
75 for execution
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First, this is a composing forum, so you shouldn't rate 'execution'
Secondly, it's not a recording, but a midi I played and recorded to mp3 (with a soundfont to get a bit better sound)
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 11:31 am Post subject:
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I've made some sort of sheetmusic for this. It has notes and some articulation marks anly and it's a bit messy at some spots; you have to come up with your own phrasing and dynamics and such if you're going to play it
http://www.chopinforum.com/~nerd/nerdywaltz.pdf
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Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 6:05 pm Post subject:
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| nerd wrote: |
| Amnesia wrote: |
I agree with PS, the left hand should be a lot softer and less mechanical. You could really make this into a beautiful recording. I really like the composition though.
95 for composition
75 for execution
85 OVERALL
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First, this is a composing forum, so you shouldn't rate 'execution'
Secondly, it's not a recording, but a midi I played and recorded to mp3 (with a soundfont to get a bit better sound)
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Sorry nerd, I didn't realise it was a midi recording. I'd like to hear your recording of this piece. Although composing is only half the battle, playing it well is the other half , I hereby change my rating to 95 for a brilliant composition Thanks for the sheet, it doesn't look easy to play, but I'm sure it would sound wonderful with some expression and interpretation
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