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Concert-Ballade V.3

Postby Jeliness2 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:58 pm

New with a longer/ less abrupt ending! Sorry, but i'm not creative enough to fix the begining... :-(

Here is a MUS. File if you want to see the music or anything.
http://www.finalemusic.com/showcase/upload/S0020932.MUS
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Postby beethoven on Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:09 pm

nice, i liked soo much

i also like those repeated notes, they remind me of prokofiev tocatta

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Postby Jeliness2 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:14 pm

Hahah, yes! Thank you very much. I kind of got into composing repeated notes after listening to ravel's alboranda grazio or something from mirrors. I think it's kind of a neat effect too. The begining need touch ups still though. But, it's a relief to finally creat an ending for this monster... lol
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Postby Philip Daniel on Sun Jan 16, 2005 6:40 pm

It sounds very professional. Contemporary in style, with touches of Rachmaninov, Prokofiev, maybe even Ravel. I like it, it has great potential.
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Postby Jeliness2 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 11:44 pm

Thanks PD
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Postby calebrw on Tue Jan 18, 2005 1:47 am

hmm, i can't not think of a great way to describe it. there is no doubt that i like it, but i guess i cannot put a finger on it, sorry
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Postby Jeliness2 on Tue Jan 18, 2005 9:53 pm

That's ok, Calebrw. But, thanks for the support anyway.
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