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Prèlude Pour le Piano

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Prèlude Pour le Piano

Postby Jeliness2 on Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:22 pm

(I was in the french-speaking mood)

Anyway, I just composed this. lol, the middle is the only good part. The begining is like an etude tableux by Rachmaninoff. Yay.
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Postby Philip Daniel on Sat Jan 15, 2005 9:07 pm

Very flowing, coherent. Still, not particularly melodious, though some of the themes have potential. The harmony seems outright impressionist. Your sense of polyphony isn’t too bad; again, it has potential. Remember to build up the intensity as piece progresses. Deserves a B+. Nice effort.
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Postby Jeliness2 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:45 am

Thank you for those nice words.
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Postby Philip Daniel on Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:48 am

Jeliness2 wrote:Thank you for those nice words.

I wouldn't say all of them are "nice", lol :wink:, but I'd hope that they are all constructively critical :D.
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Postby Jeliness2 on Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:53 am

Yeah, well atleast it's constructive unlike some peoples comments off the forum about my piano playing... So, I'm pretty used to bad criticism by now. I just kind of take it in. lol
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